The Mysterious Umbrella

Hi bloggers, 

This week in writing Term 3 Week 2 we writ a story based on a video called the Umbrella. It Is about a yellow umbrella the got stolen at the end.We had to included a simile  Here is my writing to show you what I mean.

Umbrella

One foggy dawn, while the dew fell upon the leaves, the door to Miss Elm’s Home For Children sprang open with a bang! The girl with the stunning, sunshine yellow umbrella tiptoed reluctantly into the orphanage, quickly finding a safe home for her umbrella. And not wanting to be seen Boris crisply whipped his head round the door frame so he was hidden from view. Standing off to the side the little girl watched the glorious scene as the children searched in the box for her lost treasures. The girl smiled as she watched the young boy race as fast as a shooting star. Her Smile disappeared abruptly as she looked back at the umbrella stand and all she saw were puddles. Her beloved Umbrella had mysteriously disappeared.

Can you spot my simllie?

Thank you for reading my writing hope you like it.

How to make a awesome blog post

 Kiā Ora

Welcome back to my blog week 5 Term 1 we are talking about how to make a awesome blog post.

Some people thing that you just write 1 or 2 sentences but its more then just that.

You need to draw attention to the readers so there interesting and fun. You could use poppy colours or make your writing bold and fun.

So this is what I've done to help people know its more then what they have been doing.

Do you already know how to blog?

 

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