Wednesday, April 22, 2020
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Hi Bronte
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing with us - what a great job you done at adding adjectives in your first two paragraphs. It would be really good to see a few more in your last paragraph.
Miss Gill.
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ReplyDeleteHi Bronte,
ReplyDeleteYou have worked very hard on your story Bella. I really like the you have broken it into paragraphs. I would be very scared if my boat was falling apart too. I am pleased that she was safe in the end.
Why was Bella on the boat in the first place? Where was she going?