Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, April 30, 2020
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Wow Bronte! What a fantastic amount of work you have been doing. Good description used in your writing - I was taken right to the memorial with you.
ReplyDeleteMiss Gill.
Hi Bronte,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a fantastic job with planning your story. You have really understood how people would be feeling at the parade. Could you tell me more about what is showing on the memorial?
Have you been to an ANZAC parade before?