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Thursday, April 30, 2020

Writing Week 3 - Anzac Memorial







2 comments:

  1. Wow Bronte! What a fantastic amount of work you have been doing. Good description used in your writing - I was taken right to the memorial with you.
    Miss Gill.

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  2. Hi Bronte,

    You have done a fantastic job with planning your story. You have really understood how people would be feeling at the parade. Could you tell me more about what is showing on the memorial?
    Have you been to an ANZAC parade before?

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